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Precipitation24

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are you asking if there is a structure in english that doesn't put emphasis on sagi reacting to seeing ikari blushing?

because if that's what you're asking, i would say :

is he alright?

(ikari blushes)

how is Mr.kawazu doing /how is Mr. Kawazu's condition

that way, there's not reaction of Ikari's reaction
restating the question by making more specific especially in an intense scene i think makes sense without making sagi aware of Ikari

Amazing! I am only a learner of English, but I think you have solved the problem perfectly. You can be a professional Japanese anime translator!

@Precipitation24 haha, i wish, I am part of a doujin and LN translation group but i admit that i dont do much

That is great! No wonder you can translate so well.

@Precipitation24 ありがとうございます! haha

Jokes can be the toughest for translation

Absolutely! I still have more to write about jokes and would like to write a sequel.